Sunday, June 21, 2009

then she

then she cries herself to sleep
like the thousand nights before
though she knows she's in too deep
she is strong for millions more

then she sings a melody
of her heartbreaks and burning thorns
and she hums them truthfully
there the silence heard her mourns

is there anyone out there?
would you lie to her you care?

oh cruel, cruel nights
she thinks you are her only friend
don't you give ways for the lights
she found comfort in your hand

then she smiles to greet her dreams
if only life would be as kind
with bunny rains and milky streams
cherry kisses and chocolate buns

then she prays to never wake up
cause her shivers wont stop the dawn
she fills her tears in a cup
and drinks them all while she mourns

is there anyone out there?
would you lie to me you care?

sesuatu yang aku bikin, tentang kesunyian malam. untuk mendengarnya, sila tekan butang play di tingkap sisi tangan kiri kamu.

16 comments:

Zera said...

like the lyrics..
like the music..
touch me deeply..

xuen adyla said...

the song is beautiful and its sounds really great kak fynn

vAe-DaRiYa said...

salam. HI!

this is one heck of a song-poem.

guess what? i must give credit for your song-writing - memang sangat menangkap "moment" itu. it's just that... somehow... aku pun dpt idea utk versi lagu aku.

I GUESS THE POEM IS JUST SO INSPIRING. aku terus dpt idea masa mula-mula baca lagi... oh, tapi aku bukan penulis lagu, sgt buta muzik sebenarnya.

do u still have that copy of buku merah jambu? i think i can afford one now ^_^

hope u'll keep on writing and inspiring people - aku mmg dh t'kena.

mie said...

nice !~i like d song...so much!

vAe-DaRiYa said...

I MEAN IT. Sila teruskan karya-karyamu yg sgt menyentuh jiwa.

aku bukan saja terhibur dan mendapat ilham, aku rasa "terubat".

Semoga Allah sentiasa beri kamu kebahagiaan dan makna dalam kehidupan.

Dhada said...

Suka aku dgr lagunya ^_^

Ayyman Rahim said...

Kak, i've listen to the full song :) Simply love it, upload dalam Myspace, nak download!

Anak Lipas said...

suka suka. hehe.

F a N T a S Y said...

sangat menyentuh pabila dengar full songnya

farah rosni said...

sedap. saya suka.

saya copy letak dkt myspace ye.

Nore said...

what a superb song kakak! best sangat!

Annysa M' said...

kakk , nk downloaddd :D

Anonymous said...

beutiful...

UnWantedStoryteller said...

beautiful song..

thank for share..

sarah meay. snm said...

oh kakak. then she original track tu sikit je. tak full pun. kiciwaaaa. sarah dah ada yang then she raw. nak dengar original track. waaaaaaa

Gadis said...

fynn, aku dgr then she ulang2 sampai tertidur. giler best!